Please Stop Me

I may not break, but touch with care, you’ll find some fractures hidden there. They hurt my skin and burn my eyes, as you unveil my thin disguise. I search for words, they will not come, my slow unravel they’ve undone. Press hard upon my chest your hand, and trap my heart on this warm sand. Upon my throat place hands so soft, as breathing pauses minds aloft. If eyes I close, be patient still, they’ll open soon against their will. Bind my soul with silken rope, it clings to yours and kisses hope.Β  These words I fight, abate them, please. They show to you my truth with ease. And if you can, please hold me tight, I need a taste of you tonight.


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    1. I am entirely made up of beautiful, sincere and vulnerable these days well perceived my little whippoorwill.
      I often allude to ropes and binds but soft and gentle ones, lol…speaks to the slightly darker part of me but this one was all light and love and a bit of heart swelling. So happy you liked it. Many hugs ❀️❀️❀️❀️

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  1. Very beautiful and hypnotic prose. Your words led us through this fracture palace of pain and disappointment, a place that only a new lover can see. He arrives to see her brokeness, her letdowns, and loss. He mst be careful to not injure himself while exploring these passages in her heart and soul. Perhaps, he can be the one to mend her.

    Truly beautiful write Oh Fiery One.

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      1. Smiling. Well, you are a special friend, so I do my best to read you and provide feedback.

        Enough of these freaking formailties.

        You know I like to read you. I find your writing beautiful, inspiring, and intense. Always a pleasure to stop here.

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      2. Was I being formal again??? You throw me off with your charm.
        You can stop here whenever you feel the urge…
        By which I mean, you’d better ALWAYS effing stop here or we’ll be having some serious words , Mr Lonely Author

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  2. The vulnerable emotion in this is exquisitely depicted. God it’s undeniably gorgeous. Raw poetry is this window into the soul or even just a quick moment glance into the soul and you always know how to deliver on these moments. Sending you lots of hugs and warm, happy vibes this Saturday dear M! β€οΈπŸŒŸβ€οΈπŸŒΈπŸŽ‰πŸ’œπŸ’•βœ¨πŸ˜πŸ˜ŠπŸ’œπŸ’‹πŸ‘‘πŸ¦‹πŸ”₯

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    1. My gorgeous K. Thank you so much. Your praise tickles my heartstrings. A vulnerable one from me today so it means a lot that you liked it.
      Sending much more of all that cuddly stuff back to you honey β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’•πŸ’•βœ¨πŸŒŸπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“β­β­β­πŸŽˆ

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  3. Beautiful and emotive as always. If you threw in a little spanking with that silken rope it would help Ares tame Athena a little. Actually, knowing Ares the way I do, it might be him that needs a spanking from Athena, he’s such a naughty boy.

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    1. Hmmm…I didn’t think of that. I shall have to add a bit of that naughty little idea in next time!
      Anyone ruled by Mars is very naughty indeed. I am ruled by Mercury and so most of the best parts of me go on in my head!!

      Thank you H. Love your cheeky visits

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      1. I have to admit, my godfather from whom I take my name is actually quite cheeky. It’s why the Olympians decided to dethrone him and all the Titans. There was just too much wine and cheeky going on and not enough administering to the needs of the universe. No matter, his sense of humor remains intact in my inner core.

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    1. I get so excited when you pop in to read me!!!!!
      Always love your interpretation and your favourite parts. I LOVE that part too. Something a bit naughty but also about true love. Thrills me that you picked that part out.
      Thank you lovely. Xxxxx

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    1. Thank you that means a lot to me. Very lovely to have you visit. I love that: exposed and sensual. Could be tattooed on me, it’s so true!
      Appreciate you. Thank you so much ❀️✨

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