I tried to make the moon unshine,

Unpour this breathing vintage wine,

Unbeat my heart, but I cannot,

Nor ravel this unravelled knot.

I asked the stars to please unbright

The kisses that they placed on Night.

I cannot make your voice unheard,

Unwrite your pure poetic word.

I tried and failed when undesired,

To pause when you my heart acquired.

Untouch my soul, don’t think you can

Or undo Fate’s own silent plan.

I can’t unfeel,Β 

I can’t unlove

You fit my essence like a glove.

And though my lips unkissed may be

You’ve Loved this unloved part of me.


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    1. Thank you. Those lines you picked as they lead to the ending…sigh. I love them too.

      I think we understand each other quite a bit, my little sparkling star


      1. Hahaha. You are so delightful and so so sweet. I honestly love your blog. It’s one place where I can really connect. I bow before you the princess of smouldering words.β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️😘😘

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      2. I am pretty delightful…lol.

        Thank you. It makes me so happy that you say that. I always hope my words will connect with people who feel the same things somewhere in their hearts.
        Hope you know I love your presence on my little blog. Always make me smile β€οΈπŸ’œβ€οΈπŸ’œβ€οΈπŸ’œβ€οΈπŸ’œβ€οΈ

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  1. I am undone reading this little heartbeat of a piece. Exquisite, especially that first complete stanza. You had so many perfect lines I’d essentially quote the majority back at you… alas, have some hearts to express how in awe I am of your inner goddess today!


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    1. Thank you my bright little K.
      There’s something special for me in this little piece. I’m over the moon that you liked it.
      My Goddess is in full force these days!

      Many of these and these an those for you πŸ’œβ€οΈπŸ’œβ€οΈπŸ’œπŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’”πŸ’”πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ’“πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ§‘πŸ’šπŸ’›πŸ–€πŸ–€πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’“

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      1. I felt the specialness while reading; honestly, it’s a slight on my end for not mentioning in my first comment that this may be my absolute favorite of yours, or in the top 5. 😩😍🀩


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  2. This has to be the greatest most heartfelt thing you have ever written. Thankfully it is not unwritten. I read the amazing cxomment before me, I have to ditto so many of them. This unpoem is a masterpiece. Totally in awe of this piece.

    You and I usually have a little playful back and forth, I didn’t want to disrespect this poem.
    It was SIGH worthy. Beautiful.

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    1. I feel like thank you is a terrible phrase to say to you after this comment. But from the bottom of my heart, thank you so much. I don’t need to tell you how much your words mean to me.
      I sighed all the way through writing this and when I finished, so I understand your sigh. I felt every word, I was truly inspired when writing this. Truly and deeply. It felt different.
      Aww.. no need for banter here . Just soaking in your words and sighs. I’m so happy you loved this. Thank you, my Lonely Author.
      I love it too

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