Hurt Me Please

I don’t know much but I know this, I’d perish on your tender kiss. Within the love that we would make, foundations of my world would quake. Held in your arms, I’d lose my life, embrace me with this fatal knife. And drown I would in breathless pain as love upon my heart you’d rain. Eviscerate this need from me and cut me where your eyes can see. Upon my throat press down your hand and end me where I trembling stand. With vicious force of love my lips please silence them with fingertips and push me down upon my knees and listen not to muffled pleas. My tongue you conquer as it preys upon you in a thousand ways. And hold me there with passion’s need and let me satiate my greed. And show no mercy, brutal be…my darkest self you’ve yet to see. And make them watch me writhe and moan, then savagely make me your own. Ignore my cries of painful ardour, grip my flesh and bleed me harder.

Rip my beating heart in two and

hurt me, please.

I want you to.


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    1. Thank you my darling. I do love it when you chuck literary terms at me. Makes me feel all super duper clever and stuff. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜˜

      Happy New year lovely. See you properly next week

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  1. Powerfully written piece that took my on a variety of contradictory emotions. Well done, Fiery.

    Happy New Year! FYI: A new musical event starting this weekend (it will be up for your early Saturday morning) … aFa Weekend Concert Series. A chance to enjoy songs from the same artist. Opening act is a no-brainer – the Beatles!

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    1. Thank you. I hope I can get to your musical event. I won’t actually be properly back until next week.
      So happy you liked this.
      Powerful contradictory emotions…those are my specialty.
      Hope you’re well

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  2. Vivid and strong emotions erupted from this poem making it a powerful read. Pleasure and Pain comes to mind when reading this as bearing the soul to sink that satisfaction that seems unreachable and undeserved so much that it hurts. The last line, the taking of the heart after all was said and done was the Mortal Kombat finishing moment after the fight for love. Brilliant post with so much fire behind it!!

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    1. Thank you so much for this. Sorry for such a delayed reply, i won’t be properly back until next week.
      I think pleasure and pain of the body and heart always go together. There is balance in everything because there HAS to be.
      I love your Mortal Kombat reference, I kept thinking, “Finish Him!”
      Which I would by the way, lol.

      Always a pleasure to read your thoughts. Thank you for your support and sharing with me.


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      1. 😊. You are so welcome and you don’t have to apologize for your timing to your response, I’m grateful I got one😊.
        You are correct, pleasure and pain does go together, they coexist just like light and darkness. I thought the MK reference fit perfectly to your strong writing and verses.πŸ˜‰
        I love reading your work, so powerful and heartfelt. Stay true and stay you.🌹

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